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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9779
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
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1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These social phenomena show that packaging is popular with among of people.Why it appears on? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are coming with all kinds of ideas to attract the customer.With pierce competing with the business in files,and then the culture was hit in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out the articles for daily use to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders that are a tradition,the merchants make good use of cultural psychology and make it get mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.In aspects,it appears the comparison of phenomenon in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their lives.the condition of people's life get harder and harder.so we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency.and get along well with the nature.

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