采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句法知识扎实,但需注意文中个别句子错误;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
I has thress school in my class career. and the impressive one is in my college school , which is named South Center university , and it is located in WuHan in HuBei Province . I lived here four year . the lebetary of the shcool in very fame in world because various of book was collected . and the other reason My faviration is we can see a many of sakura . everybody is knows , main of e sakura in borned in Janpa , but to be a student in this school , We can see and smell the flowre remind wihin doors .