小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My teacher is an older people .she has long hair and two big black eyes.she always wear a white dress likes angel.she has ten long fingers whit white.she very nice than help poor student classwork and always call at every student's home once a mouth.All students love she much.Everytime when i miss she,my hart will be warm.