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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6007
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够使用一些简单的从句;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

I have three schools in my class career. and the impressive one is in my college school , which is named South Center university , and it is located in WuHan in HuBei Province . I lived here four year . the library of the shcool is very fame, because you can find any book as you thinked or unthinked . and the other reason My faviration is we can see a many of sakura . everybody is knows , main of e sakura in borned in Janpa , but to be a student in this school , We can see and smell the flowre remind wihin doors .lebetary

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