采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;采用了一些简单的从句。
I have three schools in my class career.The impressive one is my college school,which is named South Center University,and it is located in WuHan in HuBei Province.I ever had lived here four year.The library of the shcool is very fame, you can find any book as you thinked or unthinked.And the other reason my favirated is we can see many sakura flower.Everybody knows, sakura is borned in Janpan , but to be a student in this school , We can see and smell the flowre remind wihin doors.