采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
I have three schools in my class career.The impressive one is my college school,which is named South Center University,and it is located in WuHan in HuBei Province.I ever had lived here four years.The library of the school is very fame,and you can find any the book what you want.And the other reason my favirated is we can see many sakura flower.Everybody knows, sakura is borned in Janpan , but to be a student in this school , We can see and smell the flowre remind wihin doors.