可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。
I have three schools in my class career.The impressive one is my college school,which is named South Center University,and it is located in WuHan in HuBei Province.I ever had lived here four years.The library of the school is very fame,and you can find any the book what you want.And the other reason my favourite is that we can see many sakura flowers in the school.Everybody knows, sakura is borned in Janpan , but to be a student in this school , We can see and smell the flowre remind wihin doors.