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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8978
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足。

用户练习作文:

As we all know that there is different appearance among different people. Some may have good look while others look not so good. In this way, some people will judge a person by their appearance. In my opinion, it is unwise to do it. There are several reasons which can explain it. First of all, the appearance of someone could not chose by oneself. It exsited when he was born. Therefore, to judge a person by their appearance is unfair to some people. Then, the appearance cannot stand the ability of somebody. So it becomes easily that the talent are missed when they are judged by their appearance. From what has been discussed above, we can get a conclusion easily that judging a person by their appearance is not only a unwise work, but also unfair to some persons.

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