一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is saturday but I am not lazy.Frist I help my mother clear our hous in the morning.After that I do my homework for one hours.I play the pinbin two hours whit my brother.I help my mother make the dinner.Our family watch TV in the night.We are talk to each other and laugh fall whit the house .What a happy day!