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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

In an increasingly popular using of internet, more and more people tend to communicate by computer instead of face to face. Communication whatever the way you want to can be easily found base on app,no matter how long distance you may be away from others. Of course,A practical character why it rates so quick recent years is that it helps us to save for much money from mobilephone with sending messages touching with others.Just a little flux,which is usually served on internet, you can accomplish most of things such as email,message or video chat etc,associating with others. Although lots of benifits we have known,there also have some important reasons for its irreplaceable .Face to face gives us more ture feelings over than internet commucation,one ignore the distance each other.This feeling can't be replaced by anything ,because the mean will be unique.

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