教育部——the Ministry of Education
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A national student sports program Here,we are infrom you a good news.national students sprots will be holded in the junior school/middle school/high school).focus on team activities,that we can get opportunity to improve team cooperation.there are total 1100thousand students participation this sports. the games including for running,high jumping,basket ball,football,table tennis,skipping rope,and so on. let's have a good habits,do exercise one hour everyday ,health work fifty years ,happy life for ever. the Minishtry of Education