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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22901[网页划词已开启]
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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文章组织结构良好;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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There was a small village was very beautiful that was my hometown.It not only was full of green trees, but also there was so much fish swimming in the river and they were very happy.My hometown belongs to nature.Houses in there were very simple and old,streets in there were narrow.people in there were owning diligence and grew many vegetalbes.But now everything has changed.More and more high buildings are building.The number of car is becoming large and streets are more and more crowded.The most significant thing is environment becoming worse and worse beacuse of the development of the industry .Fish and trees disappear a lot.So it's the most important thing to deal with this probelm.

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