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There was a small village was very beautiful that was my hometown.It not only was full of green trees, but also there was so much fish swimming in the river and they were very happy.My hometown belongs to nature.Houses in there were very simple and old,streets in there were narrow.people in there were owning diligence and grew many vegetalbes.But now everything has changed.More and more high buildings are building.The number of car is becoming large and streets are more and more crowded.The most significant thing is environment becoming worse and worse beacuse of the development of the industry .Fish and trees disappear a lot.So it's the most important thing to deal with this probelm.