小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend,she is a beautiful girl,she has big and black eyes,and the long hairs. Her smile is very charming,i am like her very much. Her study is very well,especially maths. Her favor is reading and singing. Her parents are all teachers,she says her dream is to be a teacher,too. I hope our friendship will forever.