2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing,two person in a boat tralve through the place that spread a lot of carbages. It is obvious that the person in the tralve is free throw rubbish without a heart of protect environment. The picture symbolicallly point out that the people is lack a heart of protect the environment in the tralve.Unfortunately,the act not only pollution environment but also spoil the tralve mood. For example,you imaginse will go to a beautiful place but the fact is a disguisting place all full carbage,you will still have a good mood? thefore,i believe the person should change their act in the tralve,need a protecet environment heart.there is no doubt that the environment become better as the tralver mood become cheerful.Learn to protect the environment, do not litter, let the environment more beautiful, so that the mood is more beautiful.