2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing,two persons in a boat travel through the place that spread a lot of cabbages. It is obvious that the person in the travel is free throw rubbish without a heart of protecting the environment. The picture symbolically points out that the people are lack a heart of protecting the environment in the travel.Unfortunately,the act not only pollution environment but also spoils the travel mood. For example,you imagine will go to a beautiful place but the fact is a disgusting place all full garbage,you will still have a good mood? Therefore,I believe the person should change their act in the travel,need a heart of protected environment.There is no doubt that the environment becomes better as the trailer mood becomes cheerful.Learn to protect the environment, do not litter, let the environment more beautiful, so that the mood is more beautiful.