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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7191
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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Although the economy in some large cities is developing and show a positive tendency, the quality of life is decline to some extent. This essay aims to discuss the factors and solutions of this problem. There are several factors that lead to the decline in people's life quality in the large cities. The first reason is the environmental pollution in the large cites. There are so many cars producing noise and carbon dioxide in a big city. Secondly, the environmental pollution continues to affect people's health. This indicates that health problem will influence the quality of life of people. Moreover, work pressure can affect the quality of life. In the large cities, job opportunities are very competitive and the rent and life cost are very high. Therefore, people in the large cities have to work very hard and earn enough money to survive. In order to change this situation, there are couple of suggestions can be applied to solve this problem. For example, government can plant more trees along the roads or build some parks in the communities. As known, trees can decrease the carbon dioxide in the air and produce more oxigen. Also, people should be aware of and take care of their own health. Doing sports regularly not only can maintain healthy but also can decrease the work pressure. Last but not least, people also can do something they like such as reading or watching movie, so that people can maintain in a good mood and work more effectively. In conclusion, it is beneficial that the large cities are developing, but it is also important to maintain a balanced and healthy life. As discussed above, the environmental pollution, health problems, and work pressure are the main factors influencing the quality of life of people lived in large cities. However, this problem can be solved by certain adjustment such as planting more trees and doing more exercises.

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