字数:200满分:100分
文章衔接手法恰当;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
As the drawing portrays,a goal keeper who stands in front of the goal is ready to prevent the soccer player from kicking the ball into the goal.In his mind he is much less than that he really is.At the same time,the soccer player think the goal keeper is so big. The drawing vividly reveal a truth that the confidence is of great significance to everyone. When we want to achieve our goals we should be confident.Confidence is one of the good qualities of a successful man.Self-distrust is a cause of most of our failuers.Without confidence ,we also overrate our competitors and undervalue the strength of overselves.Meanwhile,the difficulties will be magnified and we can scarcely win the success with th is psychology. There is a raw of instances, for example, when we have a examination,if we always think it is difficult for us.We will be so nervious that can not do well.If we are confident of ourselves and spare no effort to do it,we will have a goog cosequence. The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.To be confident,it is helpful for us to achieve the success.