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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9782
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena show that packaging is popular with among people.The reason why it appears? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are coming with the most ideas to attract the customer.With the fierce competition in the business filed,and then the culture was hit lastly in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out so as to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders comsidered that are a tradition,the merchants make full use of cultural psychology and make it get mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.In aspects,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their lives.The condition of people's life gets harder and harder.So we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency,and get along well with the nature.

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