2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；多多加强句法知识；作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；请注意分段。

As far as we know,computer that the day was invented to the present is only several decades,surprisingly, and it has been made use of in a wide rang of the workplace,in addition to its fast calculation and convenience operation,computer has widely spread into and extremely influence people’s daily life.Then, an increasing number of people has took much account on the excessive use of computer