作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena show that packaging is popular with among people.The reason why it appears? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants are come with the wide variety of ideas to attract the customer.With the fierce competition in the business filed,and then the culture was hit lastly in the foreign culture.The thought that is crazy is carried out so as to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders that are a tradition,the merchants make full use of cultural psychology so that it could have gotten a mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.In aspects,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their lives.The condition of people's life gets harder and harder.So we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency,and get along well with the nature.