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The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena show that packaging is popular with among people.The reason why it appears? First,the society has developed quickly in material thing.The most of merchants come with the wide variety of ideas to attract the customer.With the fierce competition in the business filed,and then the culture was hit lastingly in the different cultures.The thought that is crazy is carried out with life so as to express the fresh view.The third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders,the people have a general consensus,the merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is geting a mainstream in festival. I reckon that the packaging is a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and destroy the environment.In aspects,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their lives.The condition of people's life gets harder and harder.So we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency,and get along well with the nature.