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全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。
be a smart consumer. social and economic development brought us new kinds of goods and services,more than that,that also changed the way we buy goods.as most students rely on their parents mostly,they use their money in a way they thought wise.with the incresing economic pressure.they collect kinds of coupons seemingly in everyway and often eat and travel with group-buy deals,and even clothes on sale. for most people ,it's economical,while for me ,this may not be so much wise. first of all,the movement mentioned above will easily cause a overbuying problem.buyers only take one hand,saving money,into consideration,but they forgot the amounts of goods and services.sometimes ,it's hard for them to avoid being tempted to buy things offered at a tempting price and actually maybe they don't need them.so in this way,over a long period of time,they must spend more money than they planed. what's more,these coupons and group-buy deals would make people form bad habit of irrational spending for over a long term.and they have to know that these meassures are set by sallers aimming to sale more and make profits.so being sensible consumers,we should be cautious and avoid falling into the trap of overspending.