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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33609
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

用户练习作文:

be a smart consumer. social and economic development brought us new kinds of goods and services,more than that,that also changed the way we buy goods.as most students rely on their parents mostly,they use their money in a way they thought wise.with the incresing economic pressure.they collect kinds of coupons seemingly in everyway and often eat and travel with group-buy deals,and even clothes on sale. for most people ,it's economical,while for me ,this may not be so much wise. first of all,the movement mentioned above will easily cause a overbuying problem.buyers only take one hand,saving money,into consideration,but they forgot the amounts of goods and services.sometimes ,it's hard for them to avoid being tempted to buy things offered at a tempting price and actually maybe they don't need them.so in this way,over a long period of time,they must spend more money than they planed. what's more,these coupons and group-buy deals would make people form bad habit of irrational spending for over a long term.and they have to know that these meassures are set by sallers aimming to sale more and make profits.so being sensible consumers,we should be cautious and avoid falling into the trap of overspending.

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