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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
Recently a foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, and i will manage to take her to the yellow crane tower. Why do i choose this place to show her around to express my hospitality, reasons can be summed as follows: To begin with, yellow crane tower is a very famous tourist spot in the city even around china, which is actually one of the four most noted towers in China. So for many people the yellow crane tower is a first priority when they vist the city. Besides. in the site, you can fully enjoy the beauty not only of the nature but also the ancient architecture, famous lines from world ancient poets and the unique culture atmposphere. in a sense, the tower is a sign of old chinese culture therefore it is vey appealing to the foreigners. Above all, i know she is very interested in chinese culture and i'm certain she will love my plan and have a great time here in my city.
