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2012年3月23日托福独立写作真题附参考范文

发布时间:2013-06-06 12:59浏览次数:680
要求:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development.
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文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

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Under the holistic circumstance of globalization, the development of economy is of essential importance for every country. Consequently, an emerging issue, protecting our dependent Earth environment, has been put on schedule. People especially those governors are swaying between environmental protection and economic progress. No matter the balance leans which side, there is no reasons to develop economy at the cost of environment pollution. On the contrary, environmental contamination must be diminished gradually ending with forbidden. As for the statement is not necessaty that governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development. It is far more than a matter of governmental budgets that can solve the problem, and there is no need to assign a large amount of money to supporting the protection of environment.

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