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Not only is man the master of our earth, but other creatures such as trees, flowers and animals are also living on this beautiful and animative planet. Moreover, as the unique intelligent lives, we should assume the responsibilities to protect other organisms and render the harmonious environment together. It seems, therefore, even vital for our government to take some essential steps to protect them from extinction on earth. There are numerous reasons that we ought to protect animals and wilderness areas. First of all, without the food supply, normally the vegetations and livestocks envolved form wild plants and animals, we can support ourselves few days. Consequently, our human would deminish and then go away. what's more, on the basis of eco-balance, we are hard surviving soly on this planet if the abundant animals declined and extincted at last. Even for scientific purpose, some of them which may vanish forever and not exist again have invaluable significance for us. It is no doubt, hence, that we should protect them in terms of our own profits.
