文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误。
Hello,every one .I found some students are hate English now,I want to tell you that we should are interesed in english .Because it is useful for us to learn english.More and more students are going to abord,so we must learn english.English is also influence our life.Some students likes listening to english music,and likes watching english movie.