2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦154:患难朋友

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I think everyone needs friends . so how to make friends with others is very important for us .there are some advice for you to make friends. first .you should talk with people friendly . you must not be angry because of a little things. second. you should take care of others more than own .and we must not think clothse make a man. last.we should remember if you have a trouble with your classmates you should not have a fight withe them at once.you should talk to your classmates. if you do them well I think you will make many friends.