2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

Hello,my friend.I suppose you to visit my hometown.On the one hand,I miss you so much.On the other hand,I am eager to share some beautiful things with you.Here is my introduction. At the beginning of this,I`d like to tell you about my hometown in detail.First,my hometown lies in the northeast of China,surrounding by the enormous ocean.Because of that,the most attractive point is the climate.Every season has it own unique feature.Particularly,the mountain around my city is like a place in fairy story in winter, so beautiful which is that I can describe it without words.Next,there are also many entertainments,like the roller coast in the amusement park and fishing along the river.Last but not least,my parents are kind and passionate,they must be happy that you visit my home. Finally,I sincerely hope that you will come here to play with me.We are bound to have a nice time.