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A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television Nowardays,we can see advertisements on television everyday. Wherether the young child or the old people. Wherether the PSAs or the commercial advertisement ,that both want to share some information for us. Hear, i will share some major advantage/disadvantage of advertisement on television for you. Company made us to buy their product by commercial advertisement,but different commercial advertisement have different value. Some of the commercial advertisement share the information of their product was so exaggerating that some people was cheated. What's more,lowed down the social honest in a degree. On the other hand, that forth people to increase their ability of distinguish. Luckily, some company was honest. And some advertisement not only an commercial advertisement but an PSAs,especially in Thailand. Thier advertisement not only made people buy their product but made people move deeply. It is share something correct values. Last but not least, the PASs was the important parts of advertisement . As we all know, PSAs made us realized something important values of live,as a person.Goverment or the social union wish made me become a better person,and create the harmonious society . All in all, the PSAs has many advantage. All things considered,the advertisement on television has advantage/disadvantage,so that we should know and recognize carefully.