2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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From the picture ,we can find that the life expectancy is increase from forty to sixty years old during forty years.And the infant mortality decreace from 180 to 100 deaths per 1000 briths.In my opion,there are two main reasons for this phnomenon.One is the human living leve is becoming more and more healty.The other is the technology become more advanced. As the life is getting better and better population is gradually increasing.So many childern are difficulty to go to school.And some old pepole have no money to go hospital.So we need feed only one kid,and help the pepole who is homelessness.We should try our beast to give our country someting back.