语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句式变化多样;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
As chinese teenagers, especially living in traditional chinese family,are usually used to learning an opion or commentary by their parents or school teacher without thought deeply by themselves. So, there are a lot of person always like making his or her conclusion at once when they listening something and see something which are not so wise. for instance, there was a universal phnomenent exit in recently year that crowds of people who enjoy surfing in the internet often recieve some information by others .example , a fans saw a message about a superstar did some bad thing , so he make a conclusion that the superstar is a bad people .even he like him very much before , he decided not to like him and listen his song anymore without looking for more evidence. another instance , a lot of people include me always identify a girl or a boy who we doesn't know forehand is good or bad only by other peoples . in short ,it's not a good and wise behavior for us .we should make a conclusion by us thought through many reasons instead of what we see and listen.
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