小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend,her name is Sandy.She is a 12-year-old girl. She is tall and slim,she has long black hair . Now she is a new student at Hope Primary School. She is my classmate.She is in Class 1,Grade 1.She likes all the lessons at Hope Primary School.And she does well in English.All the teachers and students are nice to her. She has a lot of hobbies.She likes dancing,swimming,singing,drawing.And she is good at singing.She also loves sports.She enjoys playing table tennis,tennis,basketball.But she likes playing tennis best.she often plays tennis after school . Sandy's favourite superstar is Zhang Zhiyi,she wants to be a superstar,too. Sandy is my good friend,we all love her.