采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉。
I like sports,and my favorite sport is football.But Just an oppturnity that i like football by chance.One day,when i go home there is a football on the way and i play football with my friends.Since then i am interested in playing football.I often train and compete with my friends in the playground.And my favorite football play is Beckham who come from England.What's more,i want to bacome a professional football player in the future like him.