采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错。
I like sports,and my favorite sport is football.But Just an oppturnity that I like football by chance.One day,when I go home there is a football on the way and I play football with my friends.Since then I am interested in playing football.I often train and compete with my friends in the playground.And my favorite football player is Beckham who come from England.What's more,I want to bEcome a professional football player in the future like him.