高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
As Chinese teenagers, especially live in the traditional Chinese family,are usually used to learn an opinion or commentary by their parents or school's teacher without thought deeply by themselves. So, there are a lot of people who always like making his or her conclusion at once when they listen somethings and see somethings which are not so wise. For instance, there was a universal phenomenon exit recently year that crowds of people who enjoy surfing in the internet often get some information by others .example , most fans looked up a message about a superstar she like did some bad things , so he draw a conclusion that the superstar is a bad people .even he like him very much before , he decided not to like him and listen his song anymore without looking for more evidence. another instance , a lot of people include me always identify a girl or a boy who we doesn't know forehand is good or bad only by other people . In short ,it's not a good and wise behavior for us .we should reach a conclusion by us thought through many reasons instead of what we see and listen only.
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