采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena indicate that packaging is popular with among people.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the excessive competition in the business filed, the most of merchants come with the variety of ideas to attract customer's pattention;the third,during the festival,sending a present given your superior and your elders,the people have a general consensus.The merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becoming a mainstream in festival. The packaging is indeed a good thing,but the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their hard life,this is not welcome.So we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency,and it gets along well with the nature.