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作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena indicateing that packaging is popular with among people.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the widely excessive competition in the business filed, the most of merchants come with the variety of ideas to attract customer's attention;the second,during the festival,sending a present given superior and elders,the people actually have a general consensus.The merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becoming a mainstream in festival. In my first of view, the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the people's lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their hard life,this is not welcome.So we should that we try to decrease these unhealthy tendency,and it gets along well with the nature.
