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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena indicate that packaging is popular with among persons,for instance, clothes swathed in tissue paper and fruits put in hand-woven baskets and so on.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the widely excessive competition in the business filed, the most of merchants come with the variety of ideas to attract customer's attention;the second,sending a present given superior and elders during the festival,people have formed a general consensus already.Afterwards the merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becomeing a mainstream in festival. In my first of view, the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the people's lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their hard life,this is not welcome.It's necessary to take measures for us, such as we should to raise awareness in public people that the excessive packaging didn't equal high quality.And the government advocate some rules to restrict excessive packaging.
