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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Saving for living With increasing compete modern society dramatically,a great many of people suffer a heavy pressure of living.Consequently,a most of us are careful with our money in daily life.We collect all kinds of coupons, we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel, we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.Is it truly good for us?Obviously,my answer is negative. Although we bear a lot of pressure,we don't reduce our living level to exchange such life that like a begger.I have a friend like i just mention the person.She is very economic to her daily life,but she don't enjoy her life.She live in a poor house and eat bad food,she is so unhappy. As far as i am considered that we should keep an appropriate balance for this.We can look for group-buy deals if we eat out,but we also can eat big deal if we have a wonderful thing.We can save our money to invest other thing that make us become better and stronger,simultaneously,we should hard work or study to obtain more worth thing.
