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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。
Dear KPOHsales, i'm hubin from china .During the NEW YORK FAIR on 15-22,DECEMBER,i learned that a new product named 5670 from your company.I was very interested in it . please send us a price list and instruction.Thanks for your cocorporation,i hope that we can establish business relationship from each other. yours sincerely hubin
