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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear KPOHsales, I'm hubin from china.During the NEW YORK FAIR on 15-22,DECEMBER,i learned that a new product named 5670 from your company.I was very interested in it. Please send us a price list and instruction.Thanks for your cocorporation,i hope that we can establish business relationship from each other.Thanks for your cocorporation,i hope that we can establish business relationship from each other. yours sincerely hubin
