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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9783
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far. These of the social phenomena indicate that packaging is popular with among people,for instance, clothes swathed in tissue paper,placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags,or fruits put in hand-woven baskets but few.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the widely excessive competition in bussiness filed, the most of merchants come with the variety of ideas to attract customer's attention;the second,sending a present given superior and elders during the festival,people have formed a general consensus already.Afterwards the merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becoming virtually a mainstream in festival. In my first of view, the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the people's lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,then the vast majority of the people are normal citizens getting on with their hard life,this is not welcome.So it's necessary to take measures for us, such as we should to raise awareness in public people that the excessive packaging didn't equal high quality.And the government issued some policies to restrict excessive packaging.

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