可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
As the title says,it is not wise that you come to the conclusion whatever you've heard and saw .In the modern world,a lot of things is not what we see and hear,which is pretty confusing to us.In addition,a large number of teenagers have not curiosity to explore and prove the essential meanings of what they have saw the first time.It is very sad for society that teenager do this,which is due to our awful education in China.Our teacher only give students method to solve realistic problem,but ignore the significance of creative thinking.They just show the standard answer to student. As far as I can say,we are supposed to think twice before we come to the conclusion.There should be a precious process of thinking before we come to the conclusion.
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