2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。

Nowadays,with the development of economy,Internet has become a convenient way for us to broaden horizon,make friends,seek for information and go on.As far as I am concerned,it is not wise to make friends online.Now let me tell you why I think so. First,this world is more convenient than before,and people get along with others by many means,such as internet,telephone etc.Then it also causes many problems,for instance,not all people are not honest for safety when they talk with others.So some people's information leak and it causes crime. Second,there is also some unhealthy information on the Internet,as young teenagers,they will be addicted to these new things,if we encourage them to make friends by the Internet,they will speak less.At the same time,they can't get along with people who are in reality,which has an effect on their development. Third,if we all make friends on the internet,to make more and more friends and get in touch with them, we must look at the screen all the time.And after a long time,our eyes will get a pain and our body will also be harmed.It is unwise.In a word,in order to keep fit and adapt to the society,I don't agree with making friends on the internet.