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life should change In our daily life ,more and more people feel lonely becase the society is influenced by technical. In order to remove the loneliness and make the life outlast, you should create your life to become interesting. How to become interesting? Here are some advise. First, you should change your attitude of your life,you should hard work not lazy about something.Second you should have a happy heart for everyting including all good and bad. Third,you should not have an innormally life style. Becase it bad for body. In addition, you should spend time in reading. Reading not only can open your eye's side ,but also can enrich your life colorful. If you meet some trouble, book is the one of the best firends to talk with you how to slove the problems. The last one is sporting, becase sporing can build our body. It can make our life become meaningful and interesting. If you do these, your life is vital not very boring. You can spend a wonderful life because your life is substantial.
