采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒。
The many goods have existed on excessive packaging so far.For instance, clothes swathed in tissue paper,placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags,or fruits put in hand-woven baskets,to name but few.The reason why it appears? The first of reason is the rapid development of the society in material things.With the widely excessive competition in the business filed, the merchant come with the variety of ideas to attract customer's attention;the second,sending a present given superior and elders during the festival,people have formed a general consensus already.Afterwards the merchants make full use of cultural psychology what is becoming virtually a mainstream in festival. In my first of view, the excessive packaging is not solely waste the source of nature and affect the people's lifestyle to some extent.In aspect,the teenager interprets luxury atmosphere in society as a fashion,this is not welcome.So it's necessary to take measures for us, such as we should to raise awareness in public people that the excessive packaging didn't equal high quality.And the government issued some policies to restrict excessive packaging.