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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the technology , the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication has become much greater. In my opinion , it has both brings into advantages and disadvantages. As we know ,the internet has made our interpersonal communication more convenient and diversified, faster and more interesting. We could use internet to keep in touch with our companions and acquaintances and definitely strengthen the relationship . Imagine that you were an executive of Yahoo and wanted to keep in touch with your colleagues, you could use the Email and Skype to achieve this. How convenient it would be. Everything has one bad side , the internet is not an exception. Nowadays, more and more people are indulged in chatting online. These people are called indoors men. They seldom hanging out with their friends and acquaintances and was afraid of opening interpersonal communication with strangers. To be honest , this is a serious problem in China now. We need to figure out which way is more important in our interpersonal communication. We should try to make more friends in the real world, not in the internet.

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