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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；从句不足，简单句比重高；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
from:hubin@163.com to:kpohsales@hotmail.com subject: establish business relationship i have learnt a new product named 5670 of yours on the fair of new york on december 15-22th of this year. i am very interested in this new product. Please send me a cost list and an instruction manual if you want. thanks for your cooperation, and hope to establish business relationship. best regards! Hubin august 8th, 2013
