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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71658
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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注意文中个别的句子错误;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足。

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i am very gald to be a tour guide for you ,you know i know my hometown well ,so you don‘t need to worry about your trip ,just follow me i will show you the most beautiful sights in my hometown . in my hometown ,i think it is very necessary for you to experience the local customs and practices .as an old saying goes when in roman do as romans do,you can thorough understanding my hometown if you have such a unforgettable experience maybe i will take you to the most flourishing street ,eating local snakes ,enjoy local entertainment methods . all in all i will never let you feel regret for this trip ,i am here waiting for you .

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