小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；能够使用一些不错的从句。

I have a good friend, john, like playing listening to the pop music when he is free. he is a positive and warm-hearted boy, he often help other people when they meet problems that they can not solve it. as usual, he is fond of swiming and playing guitar and other instruments.